Singing? Or Stinking? C/C?
For Imagination Nomads' Diversion
I'd sail the stars on sunken ships
whose sails are made of mandolin's breath
course around triple-horned moons
following the route set by Pizarro
over icicle falls to the silent Sea
of Tranquility, carrying a rod
to smite the resident lunacies.
Finding no eagle's nest, dedicated to Apollo,
(since we never really went there, anyway)
I'd fly home again over the icy winds of Morpheus
and sit on my own roof like a pregnant falcon,
hatching legions of poems, like bees, to dark the sky..
Comments/Critiques??
[Thanks Heimie for the inspiration.]
I do not believe it is meant to "make sense" in the conventional sense, but rather to convey an abstract dream-like vision with wonderfully imaginative images that inspire the reader's own imagination. Then, after harvesting all the wonders, "fly home again over the icy winds of Morpheus"...which suggests awakening to me, or at least a return to earthly realms. The image of the pregnant falcon is outstanding, the powerful, strong, solitary predator filled with the gathered wisdom from the dream journey. I really like this very much. And I think it is also written very beautifully.
I especially love "carrying a rod to smite the resident lunacies." I think the reader can take that so many places in their imaginations and the poem remains coherent.
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